Poor Girl I Thought

A small scene observed from a distance — and the quiet hope of being wrong about it.

Some days you see something on a corner and the whole rest of the day is colored by what you imagined was happening. This is one of those days, written down.

Poor girl I thought
Standing from afar, I observed
Something sad that caught
My eyes; palpable, it pierced me

I don’t know why her story
Had unraveled before me
An old hunched back man beside her
Almost defeated, with a glimmer of sincerity

He had bought her ice cream
“Ah, her father!” I thought
They hardly said a word, it seemed
Her solemn smile a struggled pleasantry

As they walked away in silence
I couldn’t help but think
There was a sad story there
I hoped beyond hope that I was wrong

Most of the stories we project onto strangers are wrong. The hope is part of the noticing. Sometimes that’s all we get to do for them.

— JTC

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